Ok lets give it a try

Sharpe · Post by **Sharpe** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 5:40 pm

Ok last few months i have been playing around with some lyrics for a few songs im just posting them for you d00ds to read and give me some feedback on

1) http://web.outerworlds.com/hbr/for_your_love.txt (trust me it gets better),

2) http://web.outerworlds.com/hbr/hope.txt (Still needs work so dont be to harsh

),

3) http://web.outerworlds.com/hbr/love.txt (This one is the best imo probably the only one i am kinda happy with i gess) .

bartender · Post by **bartender** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 7:26 pm

have you just broken up with your girlfriend?

Sharpe · Post by **Sharpe** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:43 pm

bartender wrote:have you just broken up with your girlfriend?

mmm not quite

eclipse · Post by **eclipse** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:14 pm

Sharpe wrote:
bartender wrote:have you just broken up with your girlfriend?

mmm not quite

not sure he's ever had a gf actually

Sharpe · Post by **Sharpe** » Wed Sep 10, 2003 3:30 pm

eclipse wrote:
Sharpe wrote:
bartender wrote:have you just broken up with your girlfriend?

mmm not quite
not sure he's ever had a gf actually

Yes i have.

uatec · Post by **uatec** » Fri Sep 26, 2003 11:28 pm

Sharpe wrote:
eclipse wrote:
Sharpe wrote:
mmm not quite
not sure he's ever had a gf actually

Yes i have.

no you havent

... (somebody quote this aswell)

eclipse · Post by **eclipse** » Sat Sep 27, 2003 10:28 am

uatec wrote:
Sharpe wrote:
eclipse wrote: not sure he's ever had a gf actually

Yes i have.
no you havent

... (somebody quote this aswell)

yes, sir!

uatec · Post by **uatec** » Sat Sep 27, 2003 11:44 am

eclipse wrote:
uatec wrote:
Sharpe wrote:
Yes i have.
no you havent

... (somebody quote this aswell)
yes, sir!

thankyou

Jah · Post by **Jah** » Mon Sep 29, 2003 7:23 pm

uatec wrote:
eclipse wrote:
uatec wrote: no you havent

... (somebody quote this aswell)
yes, sir!
thankyou

I'm sure it was his pleasure

uatec · Post by **uatec** » Mon Sep 29, 2003 7:48 pm

Jah wrote:
uatec wrote:
eclipse wrote: yes, sir!
thankyou
I'm sure it was his pleasure

I bet it was, i am like that...

Jah · Post by **Jah** » Mon Sep 29, 2003 8:41 pm

uatec wrote:
Jah wrote:
uatec wrote: thankyou
I'm sure it was his pleasure
I bet it was, i am like that...

I bet you pleasure a lot of people, and i can almost touch the moon from the top of this post

eclipse · Post by **eclipse** » Tue Sep 30, 2003 8:25 am

Jah wrote:
uatec wrote:
Jah wrote: I'm sure it was his pleasure
I bet it was, i am like that...
I bet you pleasure a lot of people, and i can almost touch the moon from the top of this post

fuck egypt, we have the world's tallest pyramid!

uatec · Post by **uatec** » Wed Oct 01, 2003 4:52 pm

eclipse wrote:
Jah wrote:
uatec wrote: I bet it was, i am like that...
I bet you pleasure a lot of people, and i can almost touch the moon from the top of this post
fuck egypt, we have the world's tallest pyramid!

we could build a space elevator on top of it jah, then charge hell of a lot to use it, and then get rich...

Jah · Post by **Jah** » Sun Oct 05, 2003 7:14 pm

uatec wrote:
eclipse wrote:
Jah wrote: I bet you pleasure a lot of people, and i can almost touch the moon from the top of this post
fuck egypt, we have the world's tallest pyramid!
we could build a space elevator on top of it jah, then charge hell of a lot to use it, and then get rich...

fuck me we're going to be rich!

(now someone just needs to invent that darn space elevator

)

uatec · Post by **uatec** » Sun Oct 05, 2003 9:03 pm

Jah wrote:
uatec wrote:
eclipse wrote: fuck egypt, we have the world's tallest pyramid!
we could build a space elevator on top of it jah, then charge hell of a lot to use it, and then get rich...
fuck me we're going to be rich!

(now someone just needs to invent that darn space elevator )

why? who would pay for a pyramid like this? you?

Phaliure · Post by **Phaliure** » Mon Oct 06, 2003 8:40 am

Childish really

Post by **mid_gen** » Mon Oct 06, 2003 10:29 am

/me yawns.

Locked.